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How To Become a Freelancer – April Update
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How To Become a Freelancer – April Update

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The Legend of Aramelle as it shows up on Spotify
Legend of Aramelle on Spotify

Intro:
Nearly, finally recovered from my burns – with only one factor still preventing me from a return to work.

The Legend of Aramelle is now live! And can be listened to here on WordPress, on Apple podcasts, Spotify or Pocketcasts.

The first episode has turned out well and new episodes will be available every other Saturday for the next few months.
However, I am hoping to re-record the credits as the levels went wrong and they’re barely audible for episode one! I should be able to do it no later than episode four, so it shouldn’t be too much of a problem.

So on to the update!

Scripts Update:
Most of this past month has been focused on getting the first episode of The Legend of Aramelle ready. However, I am nearly ready to submit Troy into Oxford 42, and should be able to do that before the end of this week.

The time-travel script went into Scribe Lounge Elevate and I have made notes for a re-write on my script called Last Witch in Swanage; it’s about witches in Puritan England. Have been having trouble with this script for a while, knowing the story I want to tell, but it not coming out right when written down. Now, I have been inspired by Wednesday on Netflix, (being off work means I am finally making some headway on my watchlist) and have realised that I can tell the story better if I change the tone to a more contemporary one!

I will be making a short film – working title Grand Hotel – for the final term of my film course. I have the Easter break to organise actors, call sheets and production budgets etc. It’s a story inspired by the first line of a Regina Spektor song – also called Grand Hotel – with the first line being “Somewhere below the Grand hotel, there is a tunnel that leads straight to Hell.” There’s still some editing I want to do on the script, but it’s almost there.

Finally, I am trying to work out which of two short film scripts – the first being Billy Frankenstein, also originally written for the film course and the second being my second choice for this final-term film, entitled The Master’s Boots – to submit to the Large Format Films competition. The Master’s Boots was only voted down at the film course for production budget reasons, as it is set in the early 1900s, and needed Edwardian costumes, three locations, a certain number of extras and ideally a plane. However, the Large Format Films first prize is £5000 towards making your film, so I am heavily considering that one instead.

Plus, it has the added benefit of being inspired by something I learnt about my own family this week: That is, that my Great-Grandma had an argument with her mother about whether she was going to work as a servant in a big house nearby, or with her friends at a local factory.

Things Learnt:
Have been trying to get my head around the various different podcast services, so can advertise Legend of Aramelle as much as possible. Lots of the services do have lessons and articles in various topics, that I am slowly working my way through.

Have also learnt a bit more about which type of microphone I want to buy once my savings have recovered from my sick leave. Also, that the levels I might hear in a Mix-Pre3 Sound Mixer don’t necessarily translate easily to Garageband on my laptop!

The Legend Of Aramelle – Episode One
The Legend of Aramelle

The Legend Of Aramelle – Episode One

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Princess Aramelle escapes her father’s castle the day before she is due to be sacrificed…

In this episode:
George Coyne played Orson
Georgia Faye played Narrator/Persephone
Liam Harkins played Barry
Tayla Kenyon played Villager One
Mariana Sa Sousa played Aramelle
Am Stubberfield played Grim Reaper
Everyone played: Villagers chasing and Villagers Jeering.

Social Media:
Show email: thelegendofaramellecasting@gmail.com
Writer: Christy Sago: Bluesky: @christywrites.bsky.social
Producer: Kate Delong: Instagram: @kate.delong.creates
George Coyne: Instagram: @jorge_pereira8890
Tayla Kenyon: Twitter: @taylakenyon
Liam Harkins: Instagram: @liammharkins
Mariana Sa Sousa: Instagram: @marianasasousa123
Am Stubberfield: Instagram: @brumble_hag
Composer: Jean Loup-Pinson: Instagram: @jlpinsonmusic

Sound effects:
Jean Loup-Pinson composed the theme music, scene change music and Grim’s theme.
His website is: www.jeanlouppinson.com/
Sound effects for this episode are from BBC Sound Effects Library, Adobe Sound Effects, Freesound.org and the cast themselves.
Full credits for the sound effects as well as more information on the writing, recording and editing of this episode can be found here.

I cannot guarantee that holding onto the sides of a boat will help you survive falling down a waterfall – Please do not try it.

Thank you for listening!

Sound Effect Listings

Legend Of Aramelle – Episode One Sound Effects

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As someone interested in sound recording in general, I thought it would be a good idea to combine the credits I have to include for the sound effects in each episode with information of why I chose them, plus how I edited them.

Here is the full list of sound effects including where I got them from, plus what the original script called for:

Adobe Sound Effects used:
1. Foley cloth hit and short rustle cloth: Aramelle throws bedsheets out the window.
I combined this with a recording of Mariana shaking a blanket recorded on the day and layered them to make it sound as if they were being thrown out the window and hitting the wall of the castle/ground below.
2. Foley cloth ripping long: Sheets rip and she falls the rest of the way.
This doesn’t sound quite right for what was needed, but it was the closest I could get! I needed the sound of cloth ripping, though ideally it would have been a ‘hevaier’ sound than this as it sounds a bit too clean for an ancient castle – rather like someone is standing by a microphone purposefully ripping cloth (which is, I imagine, exactly how it was recorded).
3. Foley footsteps work boots dirt debris walking: Aramelle starts walking off.
In various different edits of the first episode I added these footsteps in and took them back out quite a lot, while you do get the context that Aramelle is leaving by the words alone, having a sound effect made it slightly more obvious, so it stayed in.
4. Foley footstep human walking through tall grass: Walking through grass.
This sound effect took me a while to find, but it’s perfect for the scene!
5. Ambience nature field windy: Birds, trees rustling.
This doesn’t quite have the birds and trees sound I originally imagined, but it does fit with the waling through grass above.
6. Liquid water river flowing water: Flowing river.
This sound was tricky to edit, as it needed to be loud to begin with, to let you know they’ve reached the river, then drop in volume while all the characters talked THEN become louder again as they reach the waterfall.
Having a sound be loud to begin with and then become background noise only in a scene is common in radio shows – think of it as the audio equivalent of an establishing shot.
7. Liquid water water footsteps walking in water: Grim Reaper walks on water.
This is another one that took a while to find. A lot of the effects were of people swimming (as obviously that’ easier to do than walking on water). There were also some faster ones, but I needed something slower – Death never has to rush.
8. Arrow shot: Arrows flying past them
This is another establishing sound. I layered a bunch of arrow shot noises, one straight after the other and changed the volume level of a few of them, so it would sound as if some were closer to the characters and some were wide of the mark.
You can only hear the arrows straight after Grim’s line of “one of those arrows to finally hit you…” and then they disappear again. If I were to repeat the noise over and over, it would mean there were too many sounds to follow the conversation.
9. Ambience waterfall exterior: Waterfall.
That being said, I did want this scene to be slightly overwhelming in terms of sound – as Aramelle and Orson are running away, all their plans abandoned and just running as fast as they can. This all cimes to a head when they get nearer the waterfall. I slowly increased this noise along with the noise of the river, until it’s as loud as their conversation – then they go over and all that’s heard after their scream is the waterfall.
10. Sword remove from sheath: Orson unsheathes his sword.
This one was realtively easy to put in, but I needed the reverse for him putting his sword away again.
11. Sword remove from sheath (reversed): Orson sheathes his sword.
This is the exact same sound as above, but backwards!
12. Sword remove from sheath: Everyone draws their swords.
And the same for all the guards.
13. Sword remove from sheath (reversed): Guards put swords away again.

BBC sound effects were used for:
1. Foreign Atmospheres – Covent Garden Market, horses & carts: Horses, villagers, market traders. (Bought)
Why the BBC lists Covent Garden Market as foreign atmosphere I don’t know, but this works great for the market. Primarily because it is one of only a few market atmosphere tracks I found that doesn’t have car noises in it and secondly, because there is a man shouting in the background of this track that sounds remarkable like Liam Harkins’ Barry, so it was too good to pass up!
2. Boats: Punting – Punting: Boarding and clambering about: Orson helps Aramelle into the boat and they start to row. (Bought)
This is another one that took a while to find. I only needed a small section of the sound to make it sound as if Orson and Aramelle were climbing into the boat, but searching for ‘rowing, boats etc.’ wasn’t showing up any sounds of boarding – just rowing. Eventually found this by searching specifically for ‘small boats’. If I had had to search for ‘punting’ specifically I’d never have found it. I know the word ‘punting’ but it would have taken me about ten years to think it might give me the sound I was looking for and ‘rowing’ wouldn’t.
3. Boats: Rowing – Rowing Boat, launch, board, ship oars & depart. (Recorded on shore.) (Recorded on board.) (One man rowing.): Rowing sound throughout. (Bought)
As the above sound only gave me boarding a boat, I then had to find another sound for Orson’s rowing throughout the scene. This sound says it has boarding, but it doesn’t work as well as mixing it with the punting sound.

Free sound was used for:
1. NistuGgner pocket watch: Grim Reaper pulls out ticking clock. (multiple)
https://freesound.org/s/706551/ — License: Creative Commons 0
This sound was surprisingly the hardest to find. There are a lot of clock noises out there, most of which either go really fast or really slow. Some are obviously Grandfather clocks. I found multiple recordings of Big Ben and while I did briefly entertain the idea of Grim carrying round an actual clock tower with them, I decided against it in the end. I wanted originally – a pocket watch being taken out of a pocket, flicked open, checked and put back in. However, while I manged to find the sound of a pocket watch being flipped open, it didn’t align at all with this, and this was the best ‘ticking’ I found. I decided to just go with the ticking and hope that it sounded more like Grim checking a wrist watch.

The cast for:
1. Aramelle throwing bedsheets: Aramelle throws bedsheets out the window.
This is what I mixed with the first sound. I needed Mariana to throw a blanket, so it sounded like it was her at the beginning. If it was just the cloth being thrown without any human noise, it wouldn’t have sounded right.
2. Aramelle climbing: Aramelle climbs out window via bedsheets.
Recorded this with Mariana stamping her feet on the floor, while threading the blanket through her hands.
3. Aramelle scream.
This may be used more than once in different episodes! Had to assure Mariana that I re3ally did want her to scream into the microphone, even though I was sat in front of her and wearing headphones.
4. Aramelle falls on Orson: Aramelle falls on top of Orson.
Mixed the scream with this, which is just Mariana hitting the wall of the recording studio with her hand.
5. Aramelle helps Orson stand: Aramelle helps Orson stand back up.
There’s a few different footstep sounds – of people standing up, stumbling, running, that while findable online are a lot quicker to add in, if you make your own!
6. Villagers chasing: They run, guards and villagers chase after.
This and the below sound were some of my favourite to record. We had a great cast, and the shouts of ‘get her’ etc. were all improvised by them.
7. Villagers jeering: Villagers jeering.
Likewise with this one. I especially like the ‘can anybody swim’ line from Liam and Am’s ‘get her’ at the end.
8. Waterfall screams: They go over the waterfall in the boat.
Even though this is in the scene, George and Mariana recorded it separately, so they could count in and make sure they screamed at the same time.

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How to Become a Freelancer – March Update

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Intro:
Still recovering from my burns and still off work, meaning my main focus for the next few months is whatever is going to save me the most money, as statutory sick pay is not built for prolonged absences!

However, I am getting there (I now only need one nap a day, as opposed to last month’s three).

The date of The Legend of Aramelle podcast release has been pushed back to 5th April. Partly to allow me to edit them well while still recovering. Also because I have found someone to compose original theme music for the show and wanted to give them enough time to deliver.

So on to the update!

Scripts Update:
The Legend of Aramelle podcast is recorded, sound effects are in place and apart from the music, the first episode is ready for release!

Troy script was entered into the Roadmap competititon, which has altered its closing date to 12th March. Am going to submit Troy into Oxford 42 as well, but have until April to do so.

The next competititon I am entering is my time-travel script which will be entered into Scribe Lounge Elevate by the end of March.

Once I’m recovered fully, I will have to make up some work on my other scripts. However, I don’t have any plans to enter those ones into any competitions for a few months, so am focussing on one script at a time while I’m healing.

Things Learnt:
Am getting better at layering sound in Garageband and the first episode really has a good sense of atmosphere when it’s needed: such as an angry horde of villagers chasing my main character and a river progressively getting louder as they near a waterfall.


Have also learnt the benefit of leaving scripts alone for as long as possible between editing. My usual method of working is to keep going back to a script until I reach a point I’m happy to send it to competitions. However, with my time travel script I hadn’t edited it in about a year and as such have been able to identify many changes to make!


From scenes that last time I edited them seemed like vital parts of the story, that I now realise can be altered or cut completely, to adding in scenes that fit the narrative past the pilot episode has been great. Also, turns out that leaving a script for a long time means I like editing it again, rather than finding it a chore.

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How To Become a Freelancer – February Update

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Intro:
Apologies for not releasing this until there’s only ten days left of the month! Turns out January and February were full on in more ways than one!

First, the good bits: recorded the episodes of The Legend of Aramelle and am currently editing them for release from 8th March. Am also keeping track of the budget for the show so I can see how much money I have to make back before I would be able to do a second series.

Also found two new writing competitions that Troy script would qualify for – Roadmap and Oxford 42 – and received new notes on the pilot from my writing course, that I hope to work through before submitting the script.

Finally, I have had to stay at my mum’s since the middle of January, as I badly burnt my legs – note to everyone, check your hot water bottles, please – and after initially thinking the burns were extensive, but not too deep and that I’d be back in work after a week, I actually ended up having a 5 day stay in hospital and am still having to walk with crutches after a skin graft operation!

Unable to get into work (warehouses aren’t built for crutches), it should be the perfect time for me to write. However, it turns out growing skin is hard work. Doctors regularly tell me to make sure I’ve upped my calorie intake (I’m bad at eating at the best of times) and I’m still having to have around three naps a day, but the healing is happening!

So on to the update!

Scripts Update:
The Legend of Aramelle podcast is recorded and apart from some sound effects that still need adding, the first episode is ready for release!

Troy script is being worked on ahead of two competition entries and time travel script will be one entered into Scribe Lounge Elevate this year.

Other scripts have fallen behind a little as I recover, but am not too worried as don’t have any set competitions to enter them in before at least July, so would rather focus on the ones that do have set competitions while my body heals!

Things Learnt:
Editing practice is going well, and am also learning to edit audio on Garageband for the podcast.
Have made a finance tracker for the podcast. Have found it very useful to track unexpected costs – such as having to get scripts printed for the cast on the day of recording and extra travel costs to reimburse after cancelled trains.


Have also recorded some – though not all – of the needed sound effects for the show and realising the best ways to record things like people falling over has been fun. The answer is, to avoid hurting your cast, to make them go near to the floor and bascially sit down hard on the floor, while saying “oof” or some such. Played back in context, it sounds pretty realistic!

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How To Become a Freelancer – January Update

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Intro:
In December, I sent out the scripts for my podcast to the cast and booked the recording space for January

I also finally got that new computer, meaning I was able to download Adobe Premier and start practising editing (my previous computer was too old for such a program).

So on to the update!

Scripts Update:
The rehearsal and recording spaces for The Legend of Aramelle podcast are booked and I am going to work on my Troy script on the writing course which starts tomorrow.

I have been working on my goldrush script as well as a screenplay about two sisters. I know where I want to go with them both now. However, editing has been slow as I have been concetrating on sorting things for the podcast. I hope to set aside a day each for both these scripts in January so I can get back up to speed with editing them.

I have also been practising editing on Adobe Premier, which has been fun to learn. I have been teaching myself with footage from the film course I’m doing. I’ve edited the footage in a variety of different ways to learn how to use editing to tell different stories with the same footage. Though I am still very slow at it, and it would be a lot easier if I had a separate mouse for my laptop rather than the trackpad, as I keep mis-clicking.

Things Learnt:
As I have more files to work on, I’m learning the use of keeping things properly stored. Though my file system makes sense to me, it’s rather difficult for anyone else to understand, so making it easier for others to find my files, if I am working with them on a project is definitely a useful skill!

I also signed up to WriterDuet – the full version. It’s a subscription and I would prefer to buy it outright, but I’ve found it the easiest way to organise all the podcast scripts. I was using Scrivener before, where I could either have one big manuscript or 12 different files – one for each episode!

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How To Become a Freelancer – December Update

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Intro:
In November, I finalised the cast and recording dates for my podcast and we will record in January!

I also signed up to a screen-writing course in Brighton in January and had my interview for it, so January is looking set to be a busy month!

So on to the update!

Scripts Update:
I finalised the scripts for The Legend of Aramelle podcast and have sent the scripts to the cast today!

I put in one of the first scripts I ever wrote – What Came Before – to the BBC. I admit it’s not a great script for competitions, hence why I haven’t entered it to the BBC before. However, I thought as I was writing the podcast scripts – which are too short at 15-20 minutes an episode – then I could either put in an old script, or put in my Gold Rush script before it was ready. Submitting What Came Before means I can still submit my Gold Rush script in their next submission window, when it will be better. As What Came Before is a small part of a very large story, I may as well submit it to a free competition as it’s likely to never be made until I’ve made lots of other things first!

In my interview for the writing course – I did reveal to the interviewer my plan for the Trojan Horse. It’s the first time I’ve told anyone and they said it was a fascinating idea. Apologies for not repeating it here, but one day I hope you’ll find out!

Things Learnt:
Am still learning sound on the film course and getting better at it. Yesterday we were filming a short film on the beach. In December. With both the waves, wind and seagulls to contend with, I was worried the dialogue wouldn’t be hear-able at all. I couldn’t do the boom mike operating myself as well as the recording so did have help from a fellow student. Meanwhile it was my job to make sure they were pointing it in the right direction, and what levels to put the sound at so the sea is in the background and the words are in the foreground! The director listened to some of the recordings afterwards and said they sounded perfect, so I guess I’ll keep learning!

I also helped to produce that short film. The director is interested in writing themselves, so I pointed out where things could be re-written or changed but allowed them to decide how to actually re-write them. I also got to write call sheets for everyone and went about getting permission from the council to film on the beach! I did have to ring the events officer directly when I hadn’t had an answer for a few days, but that was easy once I’d found their number!

Had to promise the council I’d give everyone a H+S briefing about the sea. So here I am telling everyone to not touch the sea!
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How To Become a Freelancer – November Update

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Intro:
In October, I met with someone who is interested in helping me produce my fiction podcast, and we have begun pre-production on it!

I also managed to get onto the latest TallStoryPictures script callout and received feedback from it, as well as feedback from Bafta for my plague script.

So on to the update!

Scripts Update:
I wrote some sides – mainly short monologues for The Legend of Aramelle podcast – and have already begun to receive some audition tapes!

This is the first time I have heard any characters I’ve created be performed back at me (not counting writers reading aloud my scripts) and I enjoyed hearing them so much that I spent my Friday evening making notes!
The auditions are still open until 13/11 if you would like to send in your own tape!

Received feedback from TallStoryPictures on my Troy script, though I had given them a version prior to me (once again) re-writing the beginning after a brainwave, the feedback was very useful. It made me realise that the script is worth pursuing still even if it’s not quite there yet. Plus I will take comfort in receiving the following feedback: “you’ve got a great knack for creating characters that immediately feel like flesh and blood.”

I also received feedback on All Plays Prohibited which I submitted to the Bafta film competition. Didn’t get shortlisted, but receving such detailed feedback makes me feel like it’s worth entering again and going back to edit that script again! Plus received a specific note that I have received on this script before, which shows people do enjoy reading it, even though I am aware it needs further editing! “This is a great idea for a film because it’s a storyworld that most people aren’t very familiar with, and one that’s placed in a traumatising situation we are all very familiar with (a pandemic).”

Finally am still editing my Gold Rush script, so it’s ready for BBC Writers room which opens in November. I’m putting it through the Full Script Group on Scribe Lounge, which hopefully will help me work on the ending.

Things Learnt:
Am learning sound on my film course; the subjects I most want to freelance in are: Screenwriting, Sound and Video Editing. Doing sound does take some getting used to. You are wired up quite heavily and have a microphone cable to drag around with you most of the time, too. It’s made slightly harder by the fact that I’m under five feet tall, so a boom mike usually ends up being twice my height.

However, I am getting better at managing the cables, figuring out the correct levels to record at for different scenes and setting eveything up at the beginning. I next need to learn how to put everything away again, safely, and remove all the cables on the first go. (They have various clips and buttons to make sure they stay in place, so just pulling them out isn’t an option!)

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How To Become a Freelancer – September Update

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Intro:
In August, I received notes on my Troy script and have entirely changed the beginning point of the story as a result!

I have also signed up to a new Improvisation course starting in a few weeks’ time, and will be going to the TV and Film Meetup in London on 14th September.

So on to the update!

Scripts Update:
I have the extract of my film script set dring the 1665 plague lockdown ready to submit to the BAFTA Rocliffe competition. I just need to check over all my corresponding materials and put them in the correct formats before submitting.

I finally got round to redesigning this website! Now have my own domain name (see above) and am slowly adding pages such as my new CV page.

The showreel page is still very much a work in progress and not yet live, but will be added to the site in the next few months.

In the meantime, proof-reading requests can be sent to me here. I really wanted this to be a pay-what-you-can service, and am still working on how to make sure this is set up correctly. So don’t feel like you have to go through the PayPal section to get a message to me. As long as I receive a message, I am able to work through any requests.

Have also finished Draft 1 of my Gold Rush script, and have plenty of time to edit it before December for the BBC Writers room.

Things Learnt:
Am still very much trying to save money for various life reasons at the moment, so won’t be able to update any of my software before Christmas at the earliest.

However, have begun to build myself a profile on Upwork in the meantime and will make the profile live later on this month.

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How To Become a Freelancer – August Update

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Intro:
In July, I performed in an improv play in Brighton as part of a course I was taking. Also signed up for a longer film course than the ten-week one I did earlier in the year – which will start in September.
I am planning on submitting to the BAFTA Rocliffe competition this September. The BAFTA competition works on an alternate-year basis so this year is film scripts. I am going to submit my script set during the 1665 plague lockdown in London, so will be spending August re-editing it as it’s been a while since I last looked at it.

So on to the update!

Scripts Update:
Have plans to redesign this website in August by putting in my latest CV and (once I am able to buy a microphone and editing software in a few months time) put in a showreel page of sound recording and video editing I have done.
The Trojan War Diaries edits are still happening; each new draft does tell the story better than the one before. Though I am really looking forward to being able to actually write episode 2 one day!
The Gold Rush script is coming along too, but probably won’t submit it to competitions before BBC Writers room in December as have enough other scripts to submit to various competitions before then so will focus on re-editing instead.

Things Learnt:
Turns out before I can buy the video-editing software I want and Final Draft, I have to save up to buy a new computer first (this one is a hand-me-down from my brother). However, I should be able to afford one this Christmas so my new year’s resolution will be to train myself on my new software!

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How to Become a Freelancer – July Update

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Intro:
In June, I went on an Arvon course for screenwriting – though I still don’t have the confidence to drive to the place. Was able to get professional feedback on two of my WIPs and the first ten pages of Troy. Have therefore been making some changes to the beginning of Troy based on the feedback.

So on to the update!

Scripts Update:
Am still dealing with a lot of admin tasks in all areas of my life, so the podcast drama is still on the backburner for now.
Did not get the promotion at work which on the plus side does mean I don’t have any extra responsibilities at work now and can continue to focus on my writing.
Submitted Troy – now renamed The Trojan War Diaries – into the Scribe Lounge competition. This was before the changes to the beginning so will have to see how well it does in that competition.
Have a much clearer idea of the story I need to tell with my Gold Rush script, too, so have been making edits and hoping to get that ready for submission to competitions by September.

Things Learnt:
Was told during the Arvon course that a good spec script needs drama on every page. Don’t hold things back for the second episode. Get them in the first!

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How to Become a Freelancer – June Update

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Intro:
In May, I finished the first edit of the screenplay about two sisters. The title for it is still a work in progress, but think it will be a good script for competitions once these edits are complete. Plus I have finished the first draft of my screenplay about an alternative version of the Napoleonic wars where women were allowed in the Navy. However, I think that screenplay needs to be left for a while before editing, as I discovered during writing that I didn’t really know the story I was trying to tell yet. I am also up for a promotion in my day job, so have spent this weekend preparing a presentation for the interview!

So on to the update!

Scripts Update:
Am still dealing with a lot of admin tasks in all areas of my life, so the podcast drama is still on the backburner for now.

The pilot script of a re-telling of Troy is ready for submission! The deadline for the Scribe Lounge competition is the 14th of June. I always give myself a few extra days for competitions as I have a tendency to panic when I submit, so knowing I’ve got extra time calms me down! I really like how this pilot has turned out, with good introductions to the characters and the tone I want, going forward, clear from the get go. Plus, I have blocked out the plot points for the rest of the series, so if anyone was interested I can talk at length about the scripts I haven’t written yet!

Things Learnt:
Due to the busy nature of my life at the moment, everything I’ve learnt this month has been about the importance of staying on top of admin. Something which I have always struggled with! One thing I’ve found that helps is speaking through forms with people as I fill them out to make sure I’ve not misunderstood questions. What tricks for staying on top of your life admin do you find useful?

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How To Become a Freelancer – April Update

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Intro:
During the course of March, I have finished the first draft of two new screenplays and am now trying to edit them into some coherent form. One is about witches. It was only at the end of the first draft that I realised why in fact my main character is accused of being a witch. Before that, there was no logic to the story whatsoever. Not even 1600s Puritan England logic. There is now.

I have also signed up to the website the-dots.com which lists all kinds of jobs in the industry from sound production to video editing and more. I haven’t found anything I want to apply for yet, but am looking on a regular basis.

I have realised, as well, that in terms of editing-assistant work there is in fact a surprising amount of transferable skills with my current job of working with rare books. Editing assistant work often involves labelling shots, putting them in order, syncing sound and so on. My current job involves making sure all the information given to me by the valuer matches the book I have in front of me: from title and author, to edition and value. It is the same thing only with words instead of video and audio. All I need now is to make it clear in my CV that these are transferable skills!

So on to the update!

Scripts Update:
Have not managed to do work on my audio drama this mont. I will research budgeting for a podcast studio for a few days in April and I hope to be able to book one in May.

Also in April, I will have another read-through/edit of my screenplay about actors in the 1665 plague lockdown. I try to read through my work out loud every few months, just so I am not abandoning any works before anything is done with them! Plus, if I leave the work for a few months, I’m more likely to notice mistakes when I go back to it.

My pilot scripts of a re-telling of Troy, and time travel are now back in my hands and I will re-edit them in April. The Troy script is the one I am hoping to submit into the Scribe Lounge Elevate competition, so editing that will be my priority between now and June.

The time-travel one is still submitted into another competition that I am waiting to hear from.

The draft 0 of one of my three different screenplays is now complete. The arduous task of editing has begun! I am making progress with the one about a con-artist in the Californian gold rush – I just can’t seem to work out the ending it needs. Also, as mentioned at the top, I have had a break-through in the one about the Puritan witch trials (It’s the water!) so need to go back through and make sure that doesn’t just randomly come up at the end, but is laid down from the beginning. Finally, am still working on the draft 0 of an alternate re-telling of the Napoleonic Wars where women were allowed in the army and navy in the 1700s.

Editing for my two other scripts is still ongoing. The screenplay about two actors both up for the same role might do with some time being ignored in a drawer before I go back to it, but I’m still editing it at the moment. The pilot script about vampire highwaymen now has a one-page pitch for it! I am hoping the pitch will make it clearer how I can set up what is quite a lot of lore. I have been ruthless, however, and cut out an entire main character as I realised the story would be better without them. I was only keeping them in because I liked them. You really do have to Kill Your Darlings in editing!

The short film I wrote for my film course is shot and edited! Just under three minutes long. I’m very proud with how it turned out.

Things Learnt:
Have been doing research into some agencies as I want to start sending out query letters. I have been doing research into who I want to submit to and have a list.

I have a tendency to get very overwhelmed with these sorts of things – when anything becomes official I want to run a mile – so, to make it less overwhelming, I am giving myself the whole year to submit these query letters. I have 14 agents I would like to query overall. As long as I average two a month, I’ll be done by the end of the year. The worst that will happen is I don’t hear back!

Finally, I have been hearing a lot recently about the benefits of going to production companies over agents first as that way you can approach an agent by saying you have a production company interested already – making their job a lot easier. I am unsure if this is the right fit for me, but provided I don’t get overwhelmed, maybe in a few months’ time I can have a separate list with which I can approach both at once to see who bites first.

What are your thoughts on the ‘production companies versus agencies first’ debate?

Freelance Journey

How To Become a Freelancer

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Intro:
It may have been nearly two years since I last wrote something on here, but that doesn’t mean I can’t start up again now.

I am not a freelance writer. Yet. But it is where I would like my career to get to. I have a special interest in scriptwriting and can also do proof-reading, fact-checking and general feedback.

Wanting to be a freelancer is all well and good, but it’s a difficult thing to actually get there. The idea of not making the exact same amount of money each month so as to adequately budget and not starve/get evicted etc. is a frankly terrifying one.

So what is the best way to go about it? Right now. I don’t know, but I am trying my best to walk towards it and a monthly update post on what steps I’ve made towards that goal seems like a good way of keeping track of those steps and keeping this blog updated at the same time.

Each month I will write an update of where I am at with each of the scripts I am working on, what I have submitted in places, things I have learnt that others may find useful and other (AKA things I can’t fit in the other three categories).

Scripts Update:
Currently I have six finished episodes of an audio drama, that I am working towards making as a fiction podcast this year – children’s medieval fantasy is the genre. I just need to work out how to book a podcast studio and pay some actors and I’ll be off on this one!

Not currently submitted anywhere ( but has been in competitions in the past) is my screenplay about actors in the 1665 plague lockdown.

My pilot scripts of a re-telling of Troy, and time travel are both submitted into a competition and waiting to hear any news.

The time travel one is submitted into another competition also.

I am currently working on my draft 0 of three different screenplays: One about a con-artist in the Californian gold rush. One about the Puritan witch trials and one about an alternate re-telling of the Napoleonic Wars where women were allowed in the army and navy in the 1700’s.

I am editing another screenplay about two actors both up for the same role and another pilot script about vampire highwaymen.

I have also written a short (3 pages) for an evening class I am taking in film-making. Where I should get to make the short as part of the course. This script is about a spider.

Competitions:
Haven’t heard back from any competitions I’ve submitted to in the first two months of this year, but I am taking part in the Scribe Lounge Elevate competition where the deadline for submissions is June.

Things Learnt:
Have learnt the importance of budgeting, but am not yet very good at actually doing it…

Plus as I mentioned before, am taking a short course in film-making, and though I do have some knowledge of editing, I didn’t have any knowledge of actually recording film. The course has been fascinating from this aspect thus far. I have learnt that technically, film isn’t really moving – it’s just a bunch of photographs taken really really close together and then put next to each other, which our brain interprets as movement because of how we see – this can be demonstrated by just waving your arm up and down in front of a mirror, you see your arm at the top and at the bottom, but not really in the middle; in the middle, it’s a blur and your brain fills in the gaps, creating movement where it can’t see it.

So my scripts currently submitted to competitions might be creating movement that I just can’t see yet.